First Draft Feedback

After finishing our first draft we posted our film on social networking sites to gain feedback from our target audience.  We posted it on facebook, tumblr and twitter, all sites that target the same audience, meaning its the best way to gain feedback.

Facebook

Twitter

Tumblr

This is the feedback we gained.

Improvements from comments

• All words should have an effect on them.  Otherwise they are isolated, and do not fit in with the piece.
• Sound is sometimes repetitive, yet some find it relaxing and that it makes the film flow and gives it rhythm
• Pace could be faster.  We could add more stop motion sequences into the film.